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PostSubject: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 1:09 pm

2013 Scion FRS

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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 1:10 pm

BANK

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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 1:11 pm

PART ONE

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PART TWO

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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 1:14 pm

Really look forward to seeing this build.
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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 1:44 pm

added part 1 to my story above
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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 1:46 pm

My Grammar Nazi wants to yell!



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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 2:34 pm

Don't you mean "grammar"? Wink

Aside that, cool story bro. Literally speaking haha!
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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 2:45 pm

No, as it is a title or status.
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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 2:48 pm

Lol, that last post reeks of bullshishkabob. You know you misspelled that.
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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 3:26 pm

http://www.mhhe.com/mayfieldpub/tsw/capitals.htm

Section 9.1.2
Capitalize proper names, including any particular person, object, place, project, institution, river, vessel, genus, culture, ethnic group, or formal job title


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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 3:56 pm

That is a fantastic link, informative even. And yet it has nothing to do with what Awesome or myself was referring to, lol. It wasn't about the capitalization of the word, it was the fact that you spelled the word grammar as "grammer". Either way, its not that big a deal.

@Ryan, if you'd like a thread cleanup, just ask homie.
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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 4:01 pm

I CAN NEVER BE WRONG!!!

@Ryan if you need some JDM GT86 parts or anything else, just hit up Mike, Cal, or i over at GAS and we can get you some good parts for cheap.
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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 5:16 pm

Nah your good lol

I would like some feed back on the story so far tho. Been a while since I told one and my first time writing one like this lol
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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 7:16 pm

"2 years in lompoc" - Dominic Toretto.
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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Mon Jun 30, 2014 11:17 pm

Diggin the story!

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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Tue Jul 01, 2014 1:53 pm

added a very short part 2.. I need to get pics soon
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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Sun Aug 17, 2014 5:30 pm

Lookin to sell the FR-S?
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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Sun Sep 28, 2014 11:11 pm

so anyone still play fm4 that's down to do some time attack? im getting another forza 4 tomorrow
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PostSubject: Re: fresh start..new life (the story)   Sat Oct 04, 2014 11:33 pm

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